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Hate Me With All Your Heart by ~BrOkEn2NiTe:iconBrOkEn2NiTe:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Song


V1- Sometimes I am running around in circles and flying head on into these brick walls/ If you are searching for comfort I'm probably the last person I would reccomend to call/ I'll let you down and I'm sorry to tell you that what I have just isn't enough/ Someday you'll thank me and you will realize what you felt couldn't possible be love.

Chorus- So I beg you/Push the knife all the way through/I wont ask for mercy/ I only ask tha tyou hate me/ With all of your heart.

V2- I don't deserve the simple gestures of my name coming from your lips/ I feel a twisted pleasure knowing you loathe me such a way as this/ You had your arms outstretched and wide open and I left you standing in the cold/ So please end this vengeful nightmareish story of secrets that you always knew that I told/

Chorus-

Bridge- Just let me go/ Just let me fall/ I deserve to die/ Against this brick wall/ I came and I saw/ I held your hand and I lied/ I didn't deserve to be the one to say goodbye.

Chorus repeats twice-

Hate me with all of your heart-Till fade
©2006-2009 ~BrOkEn2NiTe
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If you wanna hate me, go right ahead. I know I deserve it..

Not about my current relationship. We're still goin strong. About a past one tho.
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~DedHedPoet:iconDedHedPoet: Sep 7, 2006, 9:34:32 PM
It's great. I really liked the Bridge. Awesome job, once again!
~BrOkEn2NiTe:iconBrOkEn2NiTe: Sep 7, 2006, 9:35:54 PM
awww thanksies! and thank you for the fave!!! its def. appreciated!!!

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"Every single day/I find it hard to say/I could be yours alone/You will see someday/That all along the way/ I was yours to hold,"

"I'm ready for you when you're ready for me."

Yours To Hold-Skillet
~The-Radical:iconThe-Radical: Oct 2, 2006, 6:07:57 PM
I love verse one.

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And I'll sit and wonder,
Of every love that could've been,
If only I had something charming to say.
~BrOkEn2NiTe:iconBrOkEn2NiTe: Oct 2, 2006, 6:37:12 PM
Thank you :-) and thank you for the fave!!

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"Every single day/I find it hard to say/I could be yours alone/You will see someday/That all along the way/ I was yours to hold,"

"I'm ready for you when you're ready for me."

Yours To Hold-Skillet
~The-Radical:iconThe-Radical: Oct 3, 2006, 6:43:15 PM
:) No prob, it was the best. Swear so.

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And I'll sit and wonder,
Of every love that could've been,
If only I had something charming to say.
~zeaphyra:iconzeaphyra: Feb 16, 2007, 10:42:43 AM
OMG I love your writing.
Has a music for this song??? :)
:+fav:

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~BrOkEn2NiTe:iconBrOkEn2NiTe: Feb 16, 2007, 8:03:56 PM
Nope, I have no music for any of my songs. I just sing them acapella lol. Thank you for the fave and the watch! I'll watch you in return!

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"Every single day/I find it hard to say/I could be yours alone/You will see someday/That all along the way/ I was yours to hold,"

"I'm ready for you when you're ready for me."

Yours To Hold-Skillet
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